Monday, August 7, 2017

Crunchy Chocolate by Kate




Crunchy Chocolate

When I taste the crunchy chocolate it tastes sugary and sweet. It’s smooth when it melts and spreads throughout my mouth. It’s nourishing when I have had a bad day and all I just want to do is relax.


Crunchy chocolate feels bumpy when I run my fingers over the bits of sugar and smooth when I run my fingers over the milk chocolate that surrounds the crunchy bits.


Crunchy chocolate looks like a yellow, light brown scrumptious, delicious morsel of wonderful flavours dancing in my mouth. ("Da, da, da it's dancing in my mouth.”) I feel like eating it now!


When I eat the scrumptious morsel of chocolate I hear a crunching sound that comes from my mouth, it sounds so hard and so chewy at the same time.
SCRUMDIDDLYUMPTIOUS!!! It smells so nice, sweet, glazed and incredible what a wonderful delight. Crunchy chocolate smells so good and sooo yummy!!!
By Kate 

9 comments:

  1. Kia Ora Kate, I'm a lover of chocolate too, so I could relate to your descriptive writing. I particularly enjoyed the phrase 'It’s nourishing when I have had a bad day . . . ' I have never thought of chocolate in that light, but i have to admit, you are so RIGHT! Thank you for sharing

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  2. Thank you for your comment, I have a question for you. What is your favourite type of chocolate and what is your favourite brand? from kate b11 f.p.s

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  3. Hi Kate, I really like how you used big and interesting words like scrumptious and I love chocolate as much as you. My question is how do you come up with this topic?
    By Alisha

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  4. Thank you for that great comment Alisha. The answer to your question is I actually had crunchy chocolate the night before I wrote my descriptive. I had no idea what to write about so I decided "crunchy chocolate!"

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  5. Hi Kate, We liked how you described the crunchy bar, and also i LOVE!!!! crunchy

    By Devine and Jalierus

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    1. Hi Devine and Jailerus that was a lovely comment.Question, I would like to know if you could make your own flavoured chocolate, what flavour would it be? Think outside of the box, have a nice day.

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  6. Crunchy is one of my favourite chocolates
    Mustafaa

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  7. Hi Mustafaa, thank you so much for your comment. I have a quick question for you, what other chocolates do you like? Have an awesome day.

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  8. Hi Kate I love crunchy chocolate because I like to hear the sound of it when I put it in in my mouth .
    Is that you number 1 chocolate ?
    by Serenity

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