My Cherry
The sound of my red round cherry so crunchy like a pickle that I want to bite it all over and over again.
The taste of my crimson round crunchy cherry tastes so sweet and juicy like churros.
The feel of my rose round cherry feels so smooth, rubbery
and tough that it might slip out of my hand.
The smell of my bright red round cherry is
odorless that you cant smell any
scent
The look of my hot red round cherry looks so red and juicy that when I stare at the cherry my
tummy will start to rumble.
The feel of my rose round cherry feels so smooth, rubbery
and tough that it might slip out of my hand.
The smell of my bright red round cherry is
odorless that you cant smell any
scent
The look of my hot red round cherry looks so red and juicy that when I stare at the cherry my
tummy will start to rumble.
Kia Ora Dendae,
ReplyDeleteYou have used some great describing words in your descriptive writing. I especially like the word odourless.
Kia orana, thank you for your comment it was very nice of you to comment back and I also like that word odourless aswell.
ReplyDeleteby Dendae F.P.S
Hi Dendae,
ReplyDeleteI like how you used alliteration in your writing
by Carlsen and Caitlin B4
Hi Dendae its me Gaby, i really love your descriptive writing. My favourite is how you said "its crunchy like a PICKLE" Whats your favourite food??
ReplyDeleteBy Gaby-b4
Thank you Calsen and Caitlin for your reply. I also like my alliteration especially when it says my crimson round crunchy cherry.
ReplyDeleteWhat is your favourite fruit?
by Dendae
Hello Gaby
ReplyDeleteThank you for your comment.
My favourite food is lasagnia.
What is your favourite food?
Hi Dendae,
ReplyDeletei love how you used descriptive writing like:Crunchy, Rubbery and juicy.