One hot sunny day my family and I went
for a little trip to South Mall.
While we were driving to South Mall,
my aunty called and asked us to pick up my
cousin Alizay because she wanted to come with us and buy some makeup for herself and our aunty Mary.
Secondly, my four sisters and I got fifteen dollars each from our aunty Mary. We were excited about getting some money because we could use it on anything for ourselves. Our aunty told us that we could go to the $1, 2, 3 shop
or the supermarket. I chose to go to the Super market first and then the $1,2,3 shop.
At last my sisters and I bought some chips, sweets and drinks from the supermarket then we all went to the $1,2,3 shop and bought some slimes and a diary each. That was the end of my little shopping trip to Southmall with my family.
Hi Olivia. I like your story about the south mall.You are really lucky that you brought.I really injoyed your story.By Alima
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DeleteTalofa Olvia my name is pearl and I really like your story. Please tell more
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Kia orana Thank you for your comment Pearl. I really do like how my story turned out because it started like a real story.
DeleteWOW that was an amazing story Olivia. My favorite part was when you brought slime. I love slime do you love slime?By Paige
ReplyDeleteThank you for your comment Paige. Yes I love slime I really enjoy making it with my friends in class. But I would love to ask you a question. Have you ever made slime in your classroom? if so what colours could you see? and what did the texture feel like? was it slimey and gooey?
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