Tuesday, August 8, 2017

My Descriptive Writing by Jerome

                    
 My Descriptive Writing



Kia Ora, Bula, Hello and greetings. My name is Jerome have you ever heard of the FIVE SENSES? if you haven't heard of it then let me tell you about it.


Lets just talk about a jelly tip chocolate
One of the senses is...taste! It tastes like a burst of jelly popping in my mouth.

The next sense is...feel!. All I could feel is the chocolate melting and the jelly wobbling.

Oh what about sound? What does it sound like? When I dropped it on my plate all I could hear is the sound of my fingers typing.

The next one is using my eyes to see what it looks like? When I looked at the jelly tip chocolate I just want to dive in a pool of chocolate and bomb in the jelly.

Lucky last is...smell! its very hard to smell the  flavors of chocolate but in my mind I am sniffing the nutela and breathing in the smell of a strawberry jam.
 
 


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