Chocolate Wheelies
Chomp! Chomp! The cream inside the wheelie tastes mouth watering. I dip the cookie in milk, I bite into it, the cookie dissolves in my mouth. The cream tastes sweet, the sweetness tickles my tongue, it is chewy and delicious.
The top and bottom of the cookie feels like rough rock. The cookies are trying to protect the fluffy inside.
It looks brown and there is a pattern repeating itself. On the rough sides it looks like a pattern of a wheel but with a ‘W’ in the middle.
It looks brown and there is a pattern repeating itself. On the rough sides it looks like a pattern of a wheel but with a ‘W’ in the middle.
I take a big bite and it sounds like a tree snapping. When the cookie dissolves in my mouth it sounds like a fizzy drink going down my throat.
The wheelie smells like fresh pancakes in the morning with whipped cream on top YUMMY!
Kia Ora Tinatasha, what a fabulous opening paragraph. You capture me with such a clear picture of a very delicious Chocolate Wheelie. Yummmm.
ReplyDeleteKonnichiwa Whaea Nardi, Thank you for your comment about my choclate wheelie.I am stunned that I have actually captured you in my story. Have you eaten a sneaky choclate in class before?
DeleteHi Tinatasha, we like how you used BOLD words
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Thank you for your comment Devine and Jalierus to be honest I feel like a chocolate wheelie now.Do you feel like a wheelie too? If so what kind of wheelie would you like to eat?
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