Monday, August 7, 2017

Descriptive Writing by Alizay

                     The Vanilla Cookie

It looks rough on the outside and when I grabbed it, it made my day.  It looked so good it had a rough outside and it was as white as a cloud and hard with a vanilla inside.


I took a bite, it had a crunchy taste like a crunchy batch of cookies and when I put it by my ear it sounds like its saying Eat Me!! Then I ate it, Yes! I ate the vanilla cookie.

7 comments:

  1. Kia Ora Alizay, thank you for sharing. I don't believe I have ever had a vanilla biscuit BUT I think I just may have to have one now.

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    1. Kia Ora Whaea Nardi, thank you for your comment. Yes! I totally agree with you, make one because it is delicious.

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  2. Hi Alizay, i love how you discribed the vanilla cookie. I have never taste a vanilla cookie in my life.Have you ever tried a vanilla cookie. By Rubayat.

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    1. Thank you for your comment, YES of course Ive tasted a vanilla cookie that why I was able to describe the vanilla cookie.

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  3. hi alizay I like your story because it is descriptive even though its short whats your favorite cookie? by Cyrus .

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    1. Hi Cyrus
      My favourite cookie is the cookie time original flavour. Do you like reading long stories? I like reading in between short and not very long stories.

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  4. Hi Alizay I wish I got to taste the cooking because it sound so yummy by reading you story. What your most liked cookie
    by Serenity

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